Script

 Update for the film opening- Once the father is in the woods then falls victim to unfortunate vents the camera is no longer going to fall down and film ants eating a carcass to represent his death. The film is now going to proceed like this.

The father is going to be vlogging his experience and once he points it to himself and talks to the camera he is then knocked unconscious. The camera falls with him as the father gets dragged out of frame as if he were taken away then mauled to death (Can be inferred). The camera will tilt upward to the sky with high brightness and with around 2-3 fade cuts with opening credits. This will be the transition from the background information of the film to the beginning of the film where Luci is heading home. The quick fades from the sky to black will work as a transition from the series of vents in the past and work towards the present time in the film simultaneously representing his death as his life fades away.

Now for the script

As the film opens up with a handheld eye level shaky camera to represent what the father sees he will soon turn to face himself and he will speak to the camera the following.

"This hike is one of the best hikes I've been on so far. These trees are giving off fresh and clean oxygen and I've already picked out a few flowers for you Elain (Mother). As you saw the background and scenery are beautiful but I've been feeling this weird and scary feeling as if someone was watching me. Every now and then I hear footsteps but I can tell they're not animal footsteps unless there were of a huge animal but there aren't any birds or gators this deep in the woods."

Near the end of his lines, a loud branch snaps, and he turns and says

"Who's there?!" "Show yourself!"

The Next Piece of dialog would be the interaction with Luci's friend and his mom. There is a short interaction with Elain.

"How was your day Luci?"-Elain

"Good ma"-Luci

"Whos your friend?"-E

"Ryan"-L

"Nice to meet you Ryan"-E

"Nice to meet you too what a nice house you have"-Ryan

"thank you, Ryan. Luci hun did you get your report card yet?"-E

"Yea here it is"-L

While Elain is talking to the boys to enjoy and take advantage of their studies the kids leave upstairs to his room.

"Alright, boys use your time wisely and take advantage of your studies!"

Next, if time permits are the reaction and dialog between Ryan and Lucis as it's Ryans' first time ever seeing Luci's room.

"What is all this (Shocked)"

"It's my room I know it's a bit messy but I know where everything is. Can you pass me that pen under the wheel next to my bed?"

"Uh sure."

(Lucis pulls out and puts up crazy board)

"Whats that?"

"It's me finding out the truth about my father"

"And why did you invite me here"

"Cuz you're going to help me find out the truth" (Even more shocked)

The use of dialog and the script should develop a few aspects of Luci's life and how he's even using his friends for his personal gains. The dialog also fits in well with his complicated and messy yet well-organized life because although his room is a mess he still knows where everything is. Overall the storyboard and script go hand in hand to develop Luci's character.

This MZ signing off ✌ out